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2-Door coupe by Deepesh Pancholi

Getting perspective just right and proportion very realistic, Deepesh has sent me a rendered pencil sketch with good form rendering and some useful contour and feature lines which all help to communicate the design clearly.

I think this sketch would benefit most from stronger wheels and spokes, especially the rear which has lost its elliptical outline. Having said that the strong wheelarch shadow and tyre rendering keep the feel of realism quite high.

Overall a very good effort which is not too far from demonstrating a much higher level of skill.

 

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Possible Interpretation

There are a number of possible brands that could be applied to Bart's design but I have decided to interpret it as a 3-door Inifiniti Coupe with a slightly more sloping rear screen and a little more definition around the rear bumper/lamps.

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